Couple things, first I am not 100% sure how exactly you are injecting the drivers into the image my first guess is there is something wrong with that bit so please make sure you configure the task sequence as specified in this video EXACTLY:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MK2mlqIxtGM&t=3s
second, when the inject drive task runs, do you actually see each individual driver file name being processed by MDT? You should see each name appear under the MDT progress bar it usually takes a while 5-10 minuets bit less sometimes. If it goes quickly
and does not display the driver names then it is NOT actually injecting the drivers.
Third, if you have verified that all the drivers are actually being injected then the next thing that comes to mind is possibly something messing with your connection with the MDT server possible causes could be GPO that involves how the NIC or firewall
functions, or maybe a windows update processing a new NIC driver causing you to lose connection for a second. To verify that nothing external is interrupting your connection you can block all connections except for the one with MDT by doing the following:
- Go to a computer that is working and configure it's firewall so that it can ONLY communicate with your MDT server, your AD server, DNS server, and DHCP server with SMB enabled.
- Export the firewall rules and use the newly generated file to create a task in your task sequence to import those rules into the computer being imaged
- generate another firewall rules file with the rules you normally use in your environment and create a task to import those at the end of your task sequence
Personally for the tasks I created an "application" in MDT for deployment and it looks like this:

My suspicion is that there is an issue with the way you are injecting the drivers, it's possible that certain models would work well enough to image with Microsoft built in drivers and models with specialized hardware like an M.2 or Msata drive might
not work with microsofts built in drivers causing the issue you are experiencing.